Making readers feel sad
Updated: Oct 2, 2019
So the character is your scene is sad. But how do you get that across without saying "He was sad." How do you make a character visibly sad when your reader can't see them? There are a few things you should pay attention to. The setting, facial expressions, and the types of behaviors people usually exhibit when feeling a certain emotion.
Setting the mood with location: There are plenty of subtle touches you can add to a scene to help the reader feel sad as they go through.
-Rain (I think soft rain is the gloomiest)
-Grey sky
-Air that feels heavy and thick
-A chill breeze that stings your nose or is bothersome when you forgot a jacket
-Snow that falls down pure and silent and white
-A bright sunny day to contrast with the character's miserable disposition
-Being in an area that reminds the character of something sad/depressing/embarrassing/nostalgic. This is exhibited heavily in Jay Asher's Thirteen Reasons Why.
Facial Expressions: Characters can express these both on their own or within a conversation with other people.
-Heavy eyelids
-Trembling lower lip
-Gazing at nothing in particular
-Down-turned mouth
-Pouted lips
-Blinking to hold back tears
-Tense eyebrows
-Watery eyes
Behavior:
-Resting head on fist
-Sighing
-Slumped shoulders
-Slouching
-Avoiding eye contact
-Disinterest
-Wearing comfortable clothing like sweats or pajamas
-Not wanting to get up or do anything in general
-Cuddling in blankets
-Touching the face, particularly forehead
-Loss of appetite or pushing food around the plate
-Feeling weak
-Fiddling with something, like a frayed thread, over and over again
-Keeping hands balled up just inside the sleeves of a sweater or hoodie
I hope these details can be added to your stories as you try to evoke sadness and show, not tell, the emotions of your characters.